An excerpt from our prolouge

My friend and I have decided to write a book or at least try and write one so I have decided to post an excerpt of our prolouge on our blog. Forgive me if there are grammer mistakes.

It was the year of 1916; near the end of the Mute war. This war had been going on for 2 years and by this time, blood soaked the ground as far as the eye could see. Creatures fought for their lives; Mutants, vampires, and undead.
Sr. Brian Slusher, head of the mutants at the time, fought amongst his people. It was desperate times, fighting for the rule of all kinds.
The vampires, fighting alone, had their strength, speed, and their special powers on their side. The Undead were using their enchantment of the dead. They rose the fallen and turned them against the others. The mutants had only their special, unique, supernatural powers to use against their enemies.
Brian, using all his strength, used his power of controlling nature. Enemies around him went down with a shriek as roots dragged them down. It was an equal fight, allying with the undead and crushing the fierce vampires.
All was going well and it seemed his people would win it all, when he saw her; the one and only feared Vampire Queen. Nothing had stopped her in the past. She was fast and ferocious. There was only one that could stop her now.
He slipped away from the battle and snuck around the unnaturally formed chasm. She was standing there, watching the scene in front of her. He was about to take his last step and pounce on her, strangling her with the power of nature.
She turned at that point and growled. It was a loud and unwelcoming snarl.
“You have chosen the wrong side Brian”
“Your people are weak these days I’m not afraid”
She glared at him with such deep and burning eyes that it was hard for him to concentrate.